Ed Rider, Young Author
When my Mother died my brother and sister went through her effect and separated out what they thought I might want. Among the items were the following two stories written on notebook paper in my awful hand writing. I vaguely remember writing them for an English class. I remember I had an argument with my teacher when she said “quiescence” was not a word. I insisted it was even though it was not in the small dictionary we had in the small country school in South East Alabama. I read every book I could get my hands on and was sure I had seen that word used somewhere. When I moved to a larger school with a larger dictionary, the first thing I did was to look for that word. I was right!
When my Mother died my brother and sister went through her effect and separated out what they thought I might want. Among the items were the following two stories written on notebook paper in my awful hand writing. I vaguely remember writing them for an English class. I remember I had an argument with my teacher when she said “quiescence” was not a word. I insisted it was even though it was not in the small dictionary we had in the small country school in South East Alabama. I read every book I could get my hands on and was sure I had seen that word used somewhere. When I moved to a larger school with a larger dictionary, the first thing I did was to look for that word. I was right!
Morning Excursion
By
Ed Rider (Age 12)
1944
I swung briskly along the crooked cow trail with my
Remington .22 Simi-automatic balanced in my right hand. My step was light and
springy, my toes always touching the ground before my heels. This made for a noiseless
tread and kept me constantly in a position of potential agility. The latter is
a very important factor when walking through the swamp because there is great
danger of stepping on snakes, which are very numerous. The air I breathed
seemed especially fresh and invigorating. It contained the spicy tang of pine
needles and the heavy moldering scent of the swamp. Also in the air was the
faint but penetrating smell of the poplar pollen pods. The poplars were on my
right, fringing the swamp and rising to stupendous heights. Not to be outdone,
the cypresses in the middle of the swamp stretched their cylindrical, limbless
trunks up equal heights and to be topped off with only a handful of foliage.
The swamp, which is about twenty five feet below the level of the cow trail,
was in deep shadow even though it was a fair day. The trail on which I trod
occasionally passed through the shadows cast by the half grown leaves of the
scrub oak. The sun cast my shadow to my right about three feet which indicated
that is was near ten o’clock. If the sun had been at the same angle in the
West, I would have been almost within the shadow of the swamp.
Straight ahead and to my left I could see perhaps three
hundred yards through the stunted scrub oak. The ground at a distance was
blanketed in grey by last fall’s dead wire grass, which was about eighteen
inches high. Close at hand it was brown and green behind a flimsy veil of grey,
the brown being dead oak leaves and the green being new wire grass which was
only a few inches high with the dead wire grass forming the veil. Much of the
ground was bare and studded with smooth round pebbles, left marooned about half
an inch above the ground level by erosion. Everywhere there were huge black
stumps, relics of a once majestic pine forest.
Behind me to the North about a quarter of a mile was what is
call and “island”. This is a piece of high ground covered with a stand of high
pines. These pine islands can be seen for miles across the oak flats. Just
beyond the island was my father’s forty acre farm at the head of the swamp.
The cow trail I was following was typical of all cow trails
in that it was about 12 inches wide and two or three inches deep. The trail
kept edging closer to the swamp which made me wary because dry land snakes stay
close to the edge of the swamp. Sure enough, there ahead and to my left was a
short, thick, ugly ground rattler. He had been sunning himself until my
intrusion. Three quick squeezes of the trigger finished him and I followed the
trail on into the cool recesses of the swamp. As most cow trails do, this one
lead to a clear, deep drinking hole. Finding a suitable cypress root, I seated
myself with my back against the fuzzy bark of the root. Then, leaning my excuse
for this excursion against one side of the root, I prepared to enjoy the ever
fascinating, never changing quietude of nature in the swamp.
Never Trust a Female
By
Ed Rider (Age 12)
1944
I found her in the woods. She was lost and crying. There was
nothing I could do but take her home with me and take care of her. She was very
weak so I had to lift her gently in my arms and carry her cuddlesome form
comfortably toward home. This was quite an ordeal. Several times I was tempted
to lay her down and leave her.
But I finally made it to the house. I fed her and made her
warm and did my best to get her into a good mood. I did get her to quit crying
by showing her a little affection and by petting her a little. She was very
responsive to this. She snuggled up with her head on my shoulder and was quite
contented.
However, something had to be done. I could not keep her here
at home. What would I tell my folks when they came home? As night approached I
tried to get her to leave but she would not. I was really worried now. I did
not have the heart to just throw her out on the road. Think what might happen
to her! After a while I hit on the bright idea of hiding her from my folks. I
carried her out to a shed used to keep sacks of fertilizer and made her a bed.
This suited her quite well and took a load off my mind too.
Well, things worked out O.K. for a few days. No one ever
went near the fertilizer shed so she was not discovered. Naturally I had to go
check on her several times each night. I also had to take her food three or
four times a day. Of course being in such close contact with her, and knowing
that she depended on me, (for she had no one else) I became much attached to
her.
At this point, a very tragic thing happened! One Saturday
about a week after I had taken her into my loving care, I intended to make
things legal. I was going to find the family she had left and get their permission.
I would not think of keeping her without this permission. Just before I was
about to leave I decided to show her around the farm. All my folks had gone to
town again. As we were walking in front
of the house, a herd of goats went bounding through the woods across the road
from us. She let out a loud bleat and ran after them. I called to her to no
avail. She paid no attention. My baby goat was gone forever.
And that is gratitude for you! After I had set up nights and
fed her out of a baby bottle and petted her and showed her every consideration,
she just ups and runs off! It is something I will never forget and I will never
trust another female!